Readers flag suspicious phrasing and narrative gaps as potential AI markers
2 Nov 2 2:39 PM · 9d ago · 1 post · 6 comments · 2 sources · development 2 of 7
Multiple commenters began identifying specific sentences and metaphors they found awkward or unconvincing, including unclear references to the protagonist's 'job,' labored table metaphors, and implausible plot holes such as a three-day gap without manager contact.
“What is the human's job here? Waking up? […] Labored metaphor that doesn't add anything.”
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Scored 100% on a Pangram of the first few paragraphs.Things that alerted me. (Note that any one of these things could be fine and explainable, but so many in short order makes it obvious).> And it rang. We both did our jobs.What is the human's job here? Waking up?> the whole morning minute by minute, as if someone had laid it out on a table and…
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Let Me Ch... Link: https:// blog.alxgsv.com/let-me-check/ Discussion: https:// news.ycombinator.com/item?id=5 0340369
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What year is this set in? 2027? 2028? A lot of it feels like present day.About the future: I don't believe it's really necessary to mix traffic and pedestrians on the same road. Certainly not 3000 pound vehicles and pedestrians. I think at some point we will start new cities with completely different assumptions from what we have now.
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> About the author...Once, at the Nürburgring, he nearly collided with Kimi Räikkönen.Anyone else here interested in road course tracking (HPDE) or racing? If so, where do you go?I'm in the US Midwest and have been to Putnam Park, NCM, mid-Ohio, Pitt Race (private now...sad), and Ozark's.
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Living in a totally conceptual space all day has major downsides on your ability to enjoy your meat suit. Meat suit firmware can only apply updates when you are offline. A lot of us are walking around with severe security vulnerabilities and runtime bugs.
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Reading this story after staring at Claude-prose for weeks is a breath of fresh air, honestly.Thank you for sharing.
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i wrote three paragraphs of a management summary today, fully by hand, and got 100% ai back from pangram. ymmv.
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